Just a little taste of part of my NaNoWriMo story. Not perfect, no editing or revising yet, but I do like how this particular scene is coming along.
“What do
you think of our alpha?” he asked.
I gave
him a questioning look. “Alpha?”
“Liam
Kincaid our Commander in Chief, Lord of our Domain and Alpha of our local
werewolf pack.” He clarified irreverently.
“I’m not
sure what to think,” I said honestly. “It’s not every day fantasy bleeds into
reality. I think I’m still
processing." I hesitated, "But he seems okay.” I
finished lamely.
He waited
a beat before throwing his head back and giving one of those deep belly laughs
when something is really funny. “Okay, she says. You mean you weren’t won over immediately by
his arrogant attitude and intimidation tactics?” His laugh was so infectious I
started laughing too. I realized part of it was just left over tension and
stress but it felt good to laugh. To realize
Brian at least, had an easy way about him that made all of this seem a little
more comfortable and real. It helped
make them all seem a bit more normal – more human I acknowledged. Liam walked in a few moments later frowning at
the two of which only made us both laugh harder.
Seriously.. Thoughts?
I like this Brian guy . . .
ReplyDeleteOf course you do! :P
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